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Re: She Said [oneshot]
She found herself wanting him to lover her as a woman just love? anyway, i liked it. The characters were in character and tamaki was adorable. i'd love to read ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Who Will It Be?
i liked it. the girl wasn't too mary-sue, which is great. Though at first i thought it was a boy :wink: when she asked about girls, i didn't really think ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: He's gay now.
i *really* liked it. i'm big on the anti-homophobia thing, so this was a real nice piece to read. at first, i thought it was a girl talking about her ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: Blind
well, i liked it. Especially the bit where Iggy was explaining about the cooking near the end and hitting Max over the head with a rolling pin :lol: I must ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: delete my account plz
hey. please don't take offense. I've read a whole bunch of naruto fanfics, so, yes, I've seen worse. I liked your basic concept, and a young gaara may have reacted ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: Anna
The woman paced on the street corner, her high heels clacking against the hard pavement. The sky was clear, and the star shined their faces down on the people. Night ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: A Higher Race part 2
Water flowed constantly, disappearing into a mesh grill set into one end, to be filtered, cleansed heated and lightly scented before making its way to the opposite end, where a ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Endless Possibilities
When he stopped, he said, “They’ve been in here before. One of ‘em made a pass at a waitress.” “We don’t have any waitresses,” Dan said. Connor cocked an eyebrow. ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: With You
I stayed with you. After all we’d been though together; after all of our time apart, I held you in my arms at the end. In those last moments, the ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: A Higher Race
“It is an honour, sir. He is right through here.” I'm assuming she's speaking proper because of who he is, but saying "He is" and "It is" sounds weird to ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Barricade
I really really liked this. You captured Mello really well, or i think you did anyway. I like how you described him. And Matt. Matt was awesome. Your style helped ...
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: Vampires before midnight.
The fires roared. The only other thing that could be heard was screams of fear that rang in the air. Then all of a sudden, silence. I am the last ...
Jul 27, 2008 -
Re: Crawling
I thought it was good, but you know that already. umm... feedback is probably the same as in class.. the whole Trigger thing and all that. But another thing, and ...
Jul 25, 2008
